For our songwriting assessment we had to write an original song, perform said song and then record and rearrange/remix the song. I worked on this assessment with Joey Francis and Jacob Simmons. Joey and Jacob were on guitar and I played bass and although we usually play in a band we tried to make a song that was a bit more ambient than the music we make under ‘The Joey Bill’. The name of the song we wrote is ‘Electric Tiger Striped Vest’.
Writing/Performance:
The writing of the song started with a guitar piece that Joey and Jacob had made. The song was musically influenced by Sam Gendel and Nick Drake. We structured the song into two parts, starting with the interweaving guitars and melodic bass line which then leads into a more intense section and then fades back into a peaceful outro.
Writing for the guitar piece I kept the bass straightforward playing a simple melody that wouldn’t sound cluttered. For the second section of the song I played a more rhythmic bass line as we weren’t using any percussion for this song and this section needed more of a pushing bass line. In the outro we felt there was an almost lullaby feel and I think my bass melody emphasises that feel.
The lyrics were written by Joey based on the idea of a tarzan-like man swinging around in the jungle. We felt the idea of this man swinging on vines was appropriate imagery to accompany all the interweaving melodies. This character is the reason for the titular line ‘Electric Tiger Striped Vest’.
When it came to the performance we were well rehearsed however it wasn’t our best run-through of the song. To improve on this performance we could possibly use different guitar tones to separate them in the mix.
Unfortunately we weren’t able to get the video of the performance but hopefully our lecturer will be able to.
Recording:
For the recording of the song we dropped the song from the key of Bm to Am as changing the key was part of the criteria for the assessment. We recorded over the course of three days, including the rearranged version, in Jacobs room on a pretty DIY setup. We recorded the guitars on an Audio Technica 2020 mic and recorded the bass through a DI into Logic. For this recording we added some extra guitar layers with an electric guitar, also through a DI. For this recording I wrote a slightly different bass line that I felt more confident with.
When starting the recording we set the tempo to 140 BPM and programmed in some midi drums to record to. As one person would record their part the others would wait in the conservatory working on other assessment work which created a nice work process for us to record in.
For the second section we found that the tempo changes to 108 BPM, recording this was the same process.
Once the track was recorded we worked together on the mix, each adding little tweaks on logic. At the end we decided to take out the programmed drums as we felt the song sounded nicer without and adding them felt unnecessary. The end result was a mix that we were all pretty happy with.
Rearrange/Remix:
Our first thought for the rearranged final track was to make a house influenced remix of ‘Electric tiger striped vest’ however through the process of making the track it became more of a sonic rollercoaster than we were expecting. Rather than the initial house influence, the remix takes on many different influences.
The tempo for this remix was 120 BPM. We started the track by programming an electronic drum beat on logic, then I recorded the bass line from the second section of the original song. Although it was the same bass line on this recording I used a pic and palm muted the strings to give the bass a different tone from the original and fit more in line with the feel of the remix. For the remix we re-recorded parts of the original song but added entirely new instrumentation. While keeping elements of the original, the remix is worlds away from the first recording. The process of recording this track was rather spontaneous as we’d take it in turns to add our own parts and arranged the track as we went along rather than work out what would go where before hand. This was definitely a more creative process as we were never really sure where the track was going to go next, unlike the first recording where we knew exactly what we were going to record before we started.
The end result of our rearrangement/remix is a real journey, starting with some ambient pads and taking you through psychedelic and jazz guitar solos with a house inspired beat underneath. Nearing the end a flute solo takes you into the outro which takes the bass and guitar of the original but with the added pads and beat, before fading out with just an acoustic guitar and pad.

